Fires of New SUN

I got my first review of THE FIRES OF NEW SUN (Book 2 in the BLENDING TIME trilogy by Flux Books).

"For great action, this can't be beat." -- KIRKUS REVIEWS

The Kindle version comes out Jan. 1;
the paperback comes out on Jan. 8.

And I just finished the manuscript of Book-3. Whew!

Happy Holidays Everyone (and force all your teen friends to buy a copy of Fires!)

Fantasy vs. Reality in Y.A. Novels

I have a love-hate relationship with Fantasy. I loved the world of fantasy as a child. Dragons, witches, ghosts, werewolves, things that go bump in the night. But I also got kicked in the teeth when I discovered the world of fantasy and magic lay beyond my flesh-and-blood life. When I discovered Santa was not real, the rest came tumbling down: the Easter Bunny; birthday wishes; unanswered prayers; no fairies under toadstools, etc.

Fantasy author, George R.R. Martin, tries to make a strong case for fantasy vs. reality when he says, "Fantasy is silver and scarlet, indigo and azure, obsidian veined with gold and lapis lazuli. Reality is plywood and plastic, done up in mud brown and olive drab. Fantasy tastes of habaneros and honey, cinnamon and cloves, rare red meat and wines as sweet as summer. Reality is beans and tofu, and ashes at the end. Reality is the strip malls of Burbank, the smokestacks of Cleveland, a parking garage in Newark. Fantasy is the towers of Minas Tirith, the ancient stones of Gormenghast, the halls of Camelot. Fantasy flies on the wings of Icarus, reality on Southwest Airlines. Why do our dreams become so much smaller when they finally come true?"

Lovely thought, but I just can't buy it. He portrays this real world as mundane and humdrum. But OMG, there are things to see and experience in our brief lives that are so awesome. Try camping in the mountains away from city lights and be awestruck by a Milky Way so bright it throws your shadow. Or look at the miracle of a tiny tree frog huddled in your palm. How about the Grand Canyon at sunrise. Or music that shakes your soul. A smile cast your direction that triples your heart rate. A stained-glass cathedral window with colors more brilliant than Aladdin's treasures.

What I'm trying to say is that some authors have the ability to pull you into the glory of our world of reality with their words. Their real-world fiction can be as beautiful, magical, and sometimes terrible, as any book of fantasy.

What's Going to be the new Trend in YA?

When I wrote the first book in my Blending Time trilogy, the agent liked it because the dystopian genre was wide open. Little did I know that The Hunger Games would open a Pandora's box of dystopian of dystopain novels. At the time my agent said he was getting to many queries about vampire and zombie books. The vampire books have kinda morphed into sexy vamps, and sex and erotica is becoming more mainstream in YA books. Why not! Teens are full of hormones. When I was a teen it was "dirty" to read stuffy like that. I can't picture sexy zombies, but who knows.

So what will the next genre topic that lights up the eyes of YA readers? I have no idea, but it will be fun to watch the trend.

Writing a Novel: beginnings, middles, endings.

I've heard writers say that the easiest parts of their books are the beginnings and endings. They know where they want to start, and they can see a clear ending. The middle, for many, is the hard part. It's not too hard to create a dynamite beginning and ending (drama, flash, romance, mayhem, whatever) but to carry that energy through the MIDDLE of the book (200-300 pages) can be a greater challenge for many authors.

For me the ENDING is the hard part. I'm not a great outliner with a file of cards detailing scenes from page 1 to the end. For me the beginning is easy and fun. I like to start in the middle of the action and go forward, sprinkling enough information along the way for the reader to be filled in on the novel's world. The MIDDLE for me is fun and organic. I work up character histories (family, hopes, dreams, flaws, strengths) so the characters seem to take on their own lives as I write. I know roughly where I want the book to go, but the interaction of strong, well thought out characters do the 'heavy lifting' for me.

What is hardest for me is the ENDING. I don't want a sappy or a predictable ending, so (like many film makers) I try multiple endings. Right now I'm trying not only to end a third novel, but it is the last in the 3-book BLENDING TIME series. So that is kind of a double whammy--the end of a book plus the end of a series. It has to be just right (at least for me).

More than once I've come to the end someone's trilogy only to toss the book across the room because the author chose to use a predictable or cliched ending which killed the integrity of good writing. I think the reader deserves a memorable, unpredictable ending for any novel.

So, onward and upward to the ending (which is keeping me awake nights, but which will somehow come together). I hope, I hope, I ...

Librarians don't mess around

"I really didn't realize the librarians were, you know, such a dangerous group. ... You think they're just sitting at the desk, all quiet and everything. They're like plotting the revolution, man. I wouldn't mess with them." (Michael Moore)

"Blending Time" as a High School Discussion Book

It seems a couple of high schools have chosen "The Blending Time" as a discussion book for their students. I didn't expect that to happen, but am pleased because I think the book (and the rest of the trilogy) has a lot of social issues that teens should be concerned with and discuss. The book is a near-future dystopia in which a lot of things might indeed happen. Global climate change; famines and the subsequent battles for resources are already happening in parts of Africa. The next 50 years could see chaos or not--depending on the actions we take locally and globally.

Questions teachers might want to have their students discuss:

-- How might climate change effect them in 10-20 years?
-- Would climate change and scarce resources cause a breakdown of technology?
-- Can you think of a 'magic bullet' that might 'fix' such a dysfunctional world?
-- Could a world government (Like the Global Alliance) be effective... sort of a 'super' United Nations with teeth? What pitfalls might such a global government have?
-- How can we avoid such a future as portrayed in "The Blending Time?"
-- Any thoughts on the racial issues raised in the book? Will we become or or less racial and class tolerant in the future?

Cowgirls, Critters, & Cusses-- great writing material

Just got back from a camping and ranch vacation in Wyoming and had a blast. Did a ranch photoshoot and had to get up at 5:00 each morning to catch the sunrise on pounding herds of horses and wranglers--cowboys and cowgirls. Dramatic stuff. Did the same a sunset to catch that 'golden light.' In the towns we met old cowboys that looked like they just stepped out of True Grit. Handlebar mustaches, battered cowboy hats, and well worn shit-kickers.

Alone the way I was fascinated by the names of towns, canyons, cafes. Examples: Dirty Annie's; Crazy Woman Canyon; Dead Man Creek; etc. I jot these kind of things down, as well as descriptions of the characters we meet, to use as fodder for writing. I could never make up some of these names or characters. People watching in a local cafe and drinking the local (strong!) coffee and chatting with the waitress is great material for dialogue and character description.

GOING TO WYOMING

Heading for Wyoming for a photoshoot (cowboys, wild horses) on and near a ranch at the foot of the Bighorn Mountains. Will be camping in Yellowstone and my wife will be chasing Elk, moose, and bison with her camera at sunup when it's freezing cold. Guess who will be lugging camera equipment behind. We love to go off-road and find small towns and wander on side roads away from the freeways. I will be finishing book-3 of my BLENDING TIME TRILOGY if we survive the hot days and freezing nights. If you don't hear from me again, a grizzly probably got me. Ah, such adventure.

ARC of FIRES OF NEW SUN in print

The Advanced Readers' Copies (ARCs) of THE FIRES OF NEW SUN are printed and will be sent to reviewers during the first week of September. I hope the reviewers will rave about how wonderful the book is... or at least give it a halfway decent review! Time will tell. FIRES OF NEW SUN is the 2nd book in THE BLENDING TIME trilogy. The actual publication date for "Fires" will be January 2012.

BTW: An ARC is not the polished version of a book. If you buy or 'win' an ARC it will have typos and may have a different ending than the final version.

10 Things Agents And Editors Want to See

Agent Kate McKean has a great blog piece on what writers need to think about when submitting their manuscripts.


http://blog.figment.com/2011/08/21/top-ten-things-agents-and-editors-want-to-see-everyday-of-the-week/

THE BEGINNING OF A NOVEL

Writing the opening of a novel is not easy, but it's critical. If you don't grab the reader on the first page (sometimes the first sentence), they will likely put it down.

Editors have told me they hate prologues that set the time, place, characters, etc. These pieces of information should unfold within the story.

Beginning with a dream scene is another editor turnoff.

Also starting with dialogue often doesn't work because the reader doesn't yet know who is who and can be confused.

A good video intro to beginning your novel is in Lisa Schroeder's blog:
http://writeoncon.com/2011/08/novel-beginnings-how-to-know-where-to-start-by-author-lisa-schroeder/

Boundaries for a Dystopia

I prefer a dystopia in the not-too-distant future--some place and time you and I can see evolving from present issues going on in our imperfect world. Although I loved the action and premise of the "THE HUNGER GAMES," the time (100 yrs or a 1000 yrs from now?) was unclear, and the wicked tools of the govt verged on fantasy.

I think things will be less sophisticated and more dysfunctional in the future. I set my books about 2070, a time which many of you will see. (Let's hope my plots don't really happen in your lifetime!). When societies break down, so does their infrastructure and technology (e.g., North Korea). Because of climate change (it's real, folks!) we are going to have a water crisis in the west; rising seas (Good-by Miami and The Netherlands); and possible ocean-current reversals.

But beyond the plotting of what it will be like and when it will happen, the main thrust of any good dystopia should be the main characters and their motivations. How will our "heroes" survive and change as the book progresses? Despite any futuristic gadgets, characters with heart and goals are what the reader should care about.

THE FIRES OF NEW SUN

THE FIRES OF NEW SUN (Jan. 2012)

Here's from the blub about FIRES from the publisher's website (Flux Books). This book is the sequel to THE BLENDING TIME. Book number-3 in the trilogy should be out in 2013.

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A fight for survival in a savage, dystopian reality

Following a perilous weeks-long trek under the blazing Savannah sun, dozens of Nswibe refugees have found safe haven at a New SUN outpost—a cavern-fortress hidden in the Blue Mountains. But their troubles are just beginning.

While the New SUN movement is tested by infighting and treachery, the outpost sustains a crippling 'gade attack. Survival is vital-defeat would mean slavery, death, and the end of the Blender program, Africa's last hope. To stop the power-hungry 'gades, Jaym, Reya, and D'Shay fight to reunite the splintered factions and mount a daring counterattack.

Writing a Trilogy

When I wrote THE BLENDING TIME (Oct 2010) I thought it would be a stand-alone title. But the publisher wanted the book open-ended for sequels. So in the sequel (THE FIRES OF NEW SUN, Jan 2012), I came up with additional characters, new plot twists, and an ending readers could not predict. Again, it had to end with our heroes having an opening for a final mission in Book-3 (no title yet).

Update: THE FIRES OF NEW is in ARC form (Advance Readers' Copy), probably full of typos that the editor and I will clean up next month. Book-3 of the trilogy is printed out (VERY draft form) and lying on a card table in the living room where I toil with my pen and do my best to make a decent revision of the thing. Then I sent to my agent for a look; he will give a quick critique (phone or email); I will feel crushed that it wasn't absolutely the finest manuscript in the world; then after a day or two of pouting I will grind away again. Finally the publisher gets my best attempt, he too will crush my ego, but in the end the book will be so much better.

After I complete the trilogy, I have to give up my characters which will be hard. I

REVISING MADE EASY (NO WAY!)

Revising (for this writer) is painful. It's absolutely essential, but I find that what was brilliant in the draft is pretty humbling as I revise. "Out, damn cliches!" or "Hey, Did I say the same thing 2 chapters ago?" or "Damn, this character isn't adding a thing to the story. But I like her! I can't get rid of her. But I have too. Rats."

Revising is like rebuilding a messy spider web. You must snip this strand-- but will that whole section collapse? Maybe if I pull this little piece web across here...

A decent revision takes lots of time and patience and you must be willing to cut those amazing pieces of brilliance that lead the story nowhere. I once had two chapters in THE BLENDING TIME where Jaym and D'Shay pulled off a great con job for a free meal, but had to cut the entire gorgeous scene because the agent (rightly so) thought it broke the story's tension. 'Twas agony to cut, but it make the story SOOO much better.

There are lots of good writing books on the revision process. Anne Lomott's "Bird by Bird" is one of my favs. Just remember, good revising will get an agent/editor to read you stuff. A poorly revised piece will be deleted/trashed after one or two pages. It's worth the work.

Jazz Memorial for my Dad

I mentioned that my Dad died a couple of weeks ago. The leader of a jazz band sent me a note saying they mentioned his passing at a gig and then played "Oh, didn't he ramble," to the audience. A perfect memorial for my jazz-musician Dad. It starts as a dirge, then gets fun. Here's a great version by a Swedish jazz band. Check out the amazing gal on trombone--the band leader.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MtjIe0TyjF8

Piercings (Advice from Dr. Mike)

I saw a girl with an inflamed nostril piercing yesterday. It reminded me of my daughter having same problem about age 19. Her M.D. uncle told her that he'd had cases of young people whose infections had destroyed the cartridge in their noses, so their noses became loose flaps on their face (Google 'proboscis monkey' for collapsed-nose look).

Same with ears. Lobes aren't a real problem, it's the upper ear where the cartilage is. If that is destroyed by a piercing infection, you have floppy ears. So if one must pierce, get out the peroxide or alcohol and keep those piercing holes clean! :-)

(Altho Pierce in "Zits" seems to have no problem. Hmmm.)

WRITING FIRST DRAFTS

I usually shoot myself in the foot with a first draft of a book by constantly trying to go back to the previous paragraph or chapter and try to get it 'better.' That's a great way to get nowhere. I find that if I spend half my time revising as I go, that time is probably wasted because when/if I get to type THE END, that means its time to go back and revise--and sure as shootin', my prior revisions are probably now meaningless because the story has taken a different path than I expected.

A novel isn't like the termpaper outline you turned into your high school teacher with all the steps and substeps and themes perfectly ordered. Fiction (at least for me) starts to shape itself as it goes along. Sure, you need most of the pieces to start, and a fairly clear idea of how to get to the end. However, the ending may change as obstacles arise or you decide to drop/add a character. So don't take the first draft that seriously and don't bother messing with spellcheck. Just grind through and get that draft done.

Different Kinds of Dystopias

A Goodreads comment said "Tomorrow, the Day the World Ended" didn't seem to have the elements of a dystopia--at least not the ones he is used to. Okay, Let's compare "Tomorrow" to "The Hunger Games." Both are very different dystopias.

"Tomorrow" is set in the near future in a city we know--not many years from now. "Hunger Games" is more like Star Wars--a long, long time from now in a world we hardly recognize. "Tomorrow" shows our world messed up by a natural catastrophe and how young people cope in the mess. "Hunger" has a lot of glitz and gadgets that make neat special effects--almost like magic or a fantasy. The one thing the books have in common is a hero(ine) struggling in the world in which she is given.

I must admit that my "Blending Time" and sequels lean toward "Tomorrow" because they don't ask the reader to suspend scientific belief. All the stuff in the books seem possible. "Hunger," as fabulous as it is, has near-fantasy elements that defy belief. But you let that disbelief go and enjoy the ride. To each his/her own. Personally, I enjoy most dystopias.

Why I collect old stuff

Ever since I was a little kid I collected stuff... rocks, bottle caps, marbles, even the matchbooks from weird restaurants and taverns my parents would go. I still collect things, but now OLD things--very old. I have an Egyptian ushabti from about 3000 yrs old; fossil shrimp that are 400 million years old (plus a heap of gorgeous ammonites, trilobites, etc. from dinosaur and pre-dinosaur time). I also have some ancient Greek and Roman coins, plus a few Medieval manuscript pages written by monks in the 1200s.

Why? Because the times these things existed come alive when I touch a Roman coin handled by real people 2000 yrs go. And to heft the weight of an agatized ammonite larger than my handspan, I can visualize this amazing thing zipping through long-vanished oceans next to sea-going reptiles the size of my house. Handling a manuscript inked and embellished 800 years ago in some freezing monastery makes the history of a time and place breath again.

Besides the history, these things are breathtaking in their own right. Some are gems--such as tiny ammonites replaced entirely by pyrite. They look like gold spirals. The coins are hand stamped little pieces of art. And the manuscripts are crafted with devotion and near-impossible precision. Maybe I'm nuts, but I really like my 'old stuff.'

Dystopias and Religion?

A book-review blogger recently remarked YA dystopias seem to stay away from religion. I'm not sure he's right. Margaret Atwood's HANDMAID'S TALE (not really YA tho) takes place where a fundamentalists have taken over the government, executing priests and nuns, and making women little more than servants. My own BLENDING TIME, and it's forthcoming sequels, bring in the discussion of the role of God in the devastation of climate change and wars. I think most people (including YAs) must either think all the pain and trouble they are going thru is either "God's Will," or they wonder if God is punishing them for something. As a YA I used to wonder why the Old Testament God could smite whole cities like Thor, killing women and children, then drowning the world in The Flood. But then you constantly hear that God loves us. Love/Anger/Hate?

So, how could a dystopia not have it's "heroes" think/discuss those religious mixed messages? I think it's a loss not to probe such thoughts of people going thru dark times.

My misspent youth as a reader

I wasn't a great reader... of books. No iPods back then, but there were lots of cheap comic books. My cousin Norma and I would squirrel away in her attic and spend half the day with her stacks and stacks of comic books--probably worth a gazillion today. We devoured everything from horror to Donald Duck. It's surprising how wonderfully gross those horror comics were. Lots of zombies losing body parts; guys' flesh melting off their bones; you name it. The drawing wasn't as slick as today's graphic novels, but our imagination filled in whatever was left out.

Which leads me to say... a good author gives you a chance to fill in the book's world and allows you to sculpt the characters. The author should lead you, but not describe every facet of the plot nor of the characters. Teens are smart enough to 'get it' and flesh out plot and character. Sometimes I finding myself hitting the reader over head to be sure they get the point. That's okay in a first draft, but toss that garbage out in the revision. I think that's one of the hardest things for an author to catch--the overwriting (which I'm probably doing right now. So better quit while I'm ahead!)

Q&A about BLENDING TIME and FIRES OF NEW SUN

Here's some Q&A about my books, THE BLENDING TIME (2010) and its sequel, THE FIRES OF NEW SUN (Jan. 2012), [Book-3 of the series is due out end of 2012].

Q: How did I choose the future world in the books?
A: I started with the premise of climate change. Glaciers and icecaps are melting so seas will rise and ocean currents will change to produce new weather patterns. Lowlands will be inundated; some regions will have increased rains and floods; some will become dustbowls. By 2050 countries will go to war for basic resources. Governments break down. Basic infrastructures (electricity and communications) fail.

Q: What's it like in 2069 when our 'heroes' turn 17--the age for their govt assignments?
A: The are from the Pacific Northwest which is drying up. California and Mexico are now vast deserts. The great battles and plagues are over, but many people are forced to emigrate from this wasteland of North America.

Q: Why do they go to Africa?
A: Atlantic currents have changed and Africa is getting more rainfall. Even the great Sahara is shrinking. Africa has lost millions due to the wars and plagues. To top it off, radiation from a giant sunflare has bombarded Africa and parts of the Indian subcontinent. Chromosome damage has caused sterility. Jaym, Reya, and D'Shay are being transported with hundreds of others to help rebuild infrastructure and marry into the population in hopes of reversing the recessive chromosomal damage (sterile African + non-affected "Blender" = children) .

Q: What is THE FIRES OF NEW SUN about?
A: Our Blenders must overcome bands of mercenaries (Renegades or 'Gades) run by warlords who lingered in Africa after the Pan-Af Wars. Africans and Blenders (including Reya, Jaym, and D'Shay) have joined to form a fighting force called New SUN. New SUN has 3 bases in the Blue Mts of Chewena, E. Africa and must take on the 'gades to survive. The 'gades are determined to wipe out the smaller forces of New SUN. The fate of Africa hinges on the success or failure of New SUN.

On novels, short stories, & poems.

The Novel: I can write a novel. There's a beginning, a middle, a climax, and the end. Have a good premise and believable characters and you might pull off a novel.

The Short story: Read some of Ray Bradbury's books of short stories (Martian Chronicles or Dandelion Wine) or try THE NEW YORKER short fiction. If you're lucky you'll 'get' the concept of a short story. I used to think of a short story as a mini-novel. It isn't though. I've never been able to write a decent short story, and probably never will. Some people have the knack, maybe it's you.

Poetry: I've pulled off a couple of pretty decent Haikus, but never was able to tap into whatever poets tap into. I think some poets get the germ of an idea and slave over it until they have a fine poem, but I've heard others say they just 'download' their poems as if a muse was whispering into their ears.

My hat is off to all short story writers and poets. They perform the impossible.

Book-3 of Blending Time triology

Got myself in a bind. I had written about half of Book-3 of THE BLENDING TIME series, but Book-2 (FIRES OF NEW SUN) needed some major revising. The revision of #2 means I've got to make a lot of changes in #3. The editor wanted me to kill off a major character who I intended to have in book-3, so getting rid of the character started to tumble the dominoes of the story and the actions of the other characters.

So... back to outlining, brainstorming, making yellow stickies, then getting to the keyboard!

Death of a Father

My father died a couple of days ago. So what do I do with my conflicting emotions about this man? He was an awesome musician and craftsman. He wasn't always there to be the kind of dad I hoped for, but maybe he did his best.

I think I shall do what writers do--write. I'm going do some journaling which often helps sort out the stuff whirring in my head and which I can't articulate in words. So, journal, look out for a large emotional dump from me.

HOW TO CONCLUDE A TRILOGY

I've sent the publisher my final manuscript of book-2 in the BLENDING TIME trilogy: THE FIRES OF NEW SUN. Now I must finish the trilogy with book-3, to be finished by year's end. Questions to self: Do I have a 'happy' ending? It's a dystopia, so the ending cannot be a joyous, doing-cartwheels ending. Do our heroes (Jaym, Reya, and D'Shay) settle down, or go off to another another struggle in their dysfunctional world? Ah, so many ways a writer can go. Any reader tips welcome! (No title yet for bk-3).

The Fires of New SUN (Feb 2012)

"The Fires of New SUN" is book 2 of the BLENDING TIME trilogy. It will be published Feb. 2012 by Flux Books. I like the cover! See above.

ON TATTOOS

Advice from an older guy--don't get a tattoo till you've gotten past your youth 'cause your likely to choose one that's popular at the time, but will seem really weird in a few years. What's popular today may be very unpopular in the near future (Charlie Sheen, Vampires, etc.). I'm bringing this up because I just got my first tattoo yesterday for a VERY big birthday and it took a lot of thinking. I chose a design of a cave painting in Lascaux, France. It's lasted 20,000 years, so I think it has staying power.